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Marissa Atherton's avatar

This is lovely and poignant, Maria! I love the lines “But oh/ how the sea remembers.” How the emphasis is there as its own stanza. And the photo at the end is stunning!!

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Stephanie Oswalt's avatar

I absolutely adore this. I love the rhythm you established in this poem; it has a beautiful lyrical feel with the repetition of similar sounds. It has such a curious, mystical feel about it. Magical poem.✨

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